Essay 2 Rough Draft


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Posted by Paul Kennedy (63.205.196.29) on June 23, 2005 at 10:00:16 p.m.:

Paul Kennedy
English 301
Jeanne Guerin
Essay 2 Rough Draft
06/26/05

In A Raisin in the Sun by Lorraine Hansberry the author uses conflict to help us see the theme of the play: No matter how hard people try to improve their lives they must not forget their family or their past. To emphasize this point so use the conflict between the newer generation of the family, Walter Lee, and the older generation, Lena (mama). To show this the author uses a protagonist, an antagonist, conflict and a pyramidal pattern.

Walter is the protagonist of the play who wants to better himself and his family but can’t find a way until a $10,000 dollar check shows up for the death of his father. Walter wants to take the family’s money and invest it in buying a liquor store, but he comes across one problem his mother. Lena is the antagonist who doesn’t feel that she needs the money for herself, but at the same time refuses to give Walter all the money for his investment. “I’m sorry ‘bout your liquor store, son. It just wasn’t the thing for us to do.” (1395) She wants to do something for the whole family and investing in a liquor store isn’t in her plans. Instead she does everything opposite of what Walter wants to do with the money.

In the play the conflict is strongest between Walter and his mother. The conflict between them is their different ideals on how to make their family happy. Walter feels that in order to make his family happy they need to out of their economic oppression by investing in a liquor store where he feels they will make a lot of money and be happy. Walter feels that in order to succeed in making their life’s better for him and his family he must, “Invest big, gamble big, hell, lose big if you have to, you know what I mean.” (1401) On the other hand Lena is from a older generation that feels that working hard and saving will make the family happy. Lena wants to strengthen the family bond and morale by buying a house. But, in order to keep the house the family will have to stay in their current economic oppression and work more hours than before if they want to make the house payment. “…It’s just a plain little old house-but it’s made good and solid-and it will be ours. Walter Lee-it makes a difference in a man when he can walk on floors that belong to him…” (1405) Lena feels that with a house they will have something of their own that they can take pride in and that will make the family happier than all the money in the world.

There is a distinctive pyramidal pattern with in the play. The first is the rising action in which Lena gets $10,000 for husbands death. She is not quite sure what to do with the money. Walter knows what he wants to do with the money he wants to invest it in liquor store, but Lena won’t give him the money. The second is the climax where Lena finally gives Walter $6,500 after using $3500 for a down payment on a house. Lena tells Walter that half the money is to be used for his sister schooling. Walter doesn’t listen and uses all the money on the liquor store and loses it. And comes to an end with the falling action where Walter wants to take the white mans offer to buy their house so they won’t move into his all white neighborhood. In the end Walter isn’t able to take the white mans offer because his family helps him realize that they come from a hard working family that are proud to be who they are.

With the use of a protagonist, an antagonist, conflict and the use of a pyramidal pattern the author was able to show us, that in the end after all the money is gone and the family is at their lowest point they are able to come together and rise up to be the proud family that has existed for six generations.




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