Posted by paula Scoggins (144.160.130.16) on June 24, 2005 at 8:18:48 p.m.:
In Reply to: Re: Essay #2 Rough Draft Peer Review posted by Paula Scoggins on June 24, 2005 at 8:09:39 p.m.:
Paula Scoggins
English 301
Jeanne Guerin
Peer review
June 24, 2005
Hello Gary,
1) yes, I loved reading your response. You made me feel like I was there as you expressed how you felt
2) Examining some of the play’s elements of drama will help us see how this though is conveyed.
3) I believe it does attempt to prove a specific idea.
4) He explained each element and had supporting examples from the play.
5) Gary is a great writer in enjoyed listening to his thoughts on the drama
6) Yes, the essay had a flow about it . Each paragraph did connect.
7) The writer hit on all the key points. I thought he did a great job.
8) The conclusion wrapped up everything that was expressed in the body.
9) Since I loved his writing maybe he should write more, other than that I truly saw nothing wrong. Gary thanks for the good reading.