Posted by Lourdes Hernandez (66.242.169.135) on June 24, 2005 at 8:50:08 p.m.:
In Reply to: Sahotaessay2-Rough Draft posted by Kammy Sahota on June 23, 2005 at 8:19:50 p.m.:
Reader's Name: Lourdes Hernandez
Writers Name: Kammy Sahota
1) Review the assignment requirements. Read the essay. In your opinion, does the writer answer the essay assignment in this piece? Explain. Yes, the writer use exposition and conflict as their elements of drama.
2) Write the thesis statement here: The use of exposition and conflict in Lorraine Hansberry’s “A Raisin in the Sun” are vital as elements of drama to the tying together of the plot and theme of the play.
3) Does the thesis attempt to prove a specific idea, or is it too general?
A specific idea.
4) What specific evidence does the writer provide to support the thesis?
The writer uses evidence refering to the story in each supporting paragraph.
5) Does the writer explicitly show how this evidence supports his/her view? Are connections made for the reader? Yes, I can see how the ideas support the thesis.
6) Does each paragraph connect with the thesis? Yes, each paragraph referrs to the idea of the thesis.
7) Is there additional evidence which the writer has missed? Not that I can see.
8) Does the conclusion sum up the writer's point? Yes it conclusion referrs to the thesis.
9) Give the writer at least one suggestion for improving this paper.
I think that Kamy did a fine job.